Friday, November 16, 2012

Blog Writing #23: A Thesis Statement

Complete the following sentences:

Men and women are similar in that...

Men and women are different in terms of...

Holly and Greg are similar in that...

Holly and Greg are different in terms of...

27 comments:

  1. Men and women are similar in that they are both human beings.

    Men and women are different in terms of communication process.

    Holly and Greg are similar in that they are both from NY (not sure)

    Holly and Greg are different in terms of techniques to teach the class.

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    1. 100%.
      Greg and I are both from NY, but I'm from Long Island and Greg is from Buffalo, which is like being from two different countries ;)

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  2. Men and women are similar in that they all like to win.
    Men and women are different in terms of expectations from relationships.
    Holly and Greg are similar in that they both teach English.
    Holly and Greg are different in terms of gender and attitude.

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  3. 1. they both like to win (not all)

    2. finish the sentence!
    Men and women are different in terms of expectations from relationships: Women want a best friend and men want...

    4. I know the difference between our genders (that's obvious), but what's the difference between our attitudes?

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    1. Do I have to say truth? I always write whatever is correct.

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    2. You can say the truth without fear. Whatever happens in 5A stays in 5A :D

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    3. 2. Men and women are different in terms of expectations from relationships: Women want a best friend and men want a housekeeper.

      4. Holly and Greg are different in terms of genders and attitudes to students who are late for class.

      Is it ok?

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    4. haha just thinking about reality takes more time than saying whatever is on my mind :p

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    5. First one: LOL

      Second one: So what is the difference in our attitudes? I'm curious to know the answer!

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  4. 4. Holly and Greg are different in terms of genders and attitudes to students who are late for class: Greg ignores them, Holly welcomes them. :D

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    1. That's funny. I'd love to know some more differences between us!

      Since the gender difference is obvious, I think a better thesis is as follows:
      Holly and Greg are different in terms of their attitude toward students who are late to class.

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    2. Men and women are similar in that they both care about money.

      Men and women are different in terms of their emotions.

      Holly and Greg are similar in that they both have great experiences on life.

      Holly and Greg are different in terms of raising their children.

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    3. Good sentences, Fahad.
      How are Greg and I different in terms of raising our children?

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  5. Men and women are similar in that they both like to compete each other.

    Men and women are different in terms of genetic inclination.

    Holly and Greg are similar in that they both value the student.

    Holly and Greg are different in terms of strategies to present the idea.

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    1. These are good sentences gramatically, but I don't know what you mean by "genetic inclination." Also, do you really think that both men and women like to compete with each other?

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    2. got it.
      What about my second question?

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    3. No, I just wanted to complete the sentence.

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  6. Men and women are similar in that they both are homo sapiens.

    Men and women are different in terms of deoxyribonucleic acid.

    Holly and Greg are similar in that they both prepare their class well.

    Holly and Greg are different in terms of the style of teaching.

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  7. Men and women are similar in that they are fool when they fall in love.

    Men and women are different in terms of acting at a party.

    Holly and Greg are similar in that they are good teachers.

    Holly and Greg are different in terms of hobbies.

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  8. Men and women are similar in that they are both want to be rich .

    Men and women are different in terms of their pheromone.

    Holly and Greg are similar in that they are both have children.

    Holly and Greg are different in terms of their way to do body language.

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  9. Man and women are similar in that when they work they give the best they can to achieve their goals.

    Men and women are different in terms of wearing cloth.

    Holly and Greg are similar in that they have the same job.

    Holly and Greg Are different in terms of their teaching skills.

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    1. Men and women are the same in terms of wearing clothes. WE both wear clothes!

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  10. Men and women are similar in that they both like cars.

    Men and women are similar in that men loves cars with lots of horse power while women loves cars that looks good.

    Men and women are different in terms of way of thinking.

    Holly and Greg are similar in that they both motivate their students.

    Holly and Greg are different in terms of teaching.

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