1."The language that I want our child to learn," Lucy answered, "good English". R.S: Lucy answered that was good English, the language that she wanted their child to learn.
2. "That's English?" Ricky asked. R.S: Ricky asked if that was English.
3. "It's funny thing," Lucy said, "when it's spoken correctly, you don't even recognize it, do you?" R.S: Lucy said, it was funny that Ricky didn't even recognize English when it was spoken correctly.
4. "You know, I had no idea how sloppy my speech was till I started reading this book." Lucy said to Ricky. R.S: Lucy told Ricky that she had had no idea how sloppy her speech had been till she had started reading that book.
5. "No really," Lucy said, "it's truth, but they have wonderful exercise to correct it." R.S: Lucy said that was truth, but they had wonderful exercise to correct it.
6. "What did you say?" Lucy asked. R.S: Lucy asked, what he had said.
7. "You heard what I said." Ricky answered. R.S: Ricky told her that she had heard what he had said.
8. "Promise me that until our child is at least 19 or 20 years old you won't talk to it." Lucy asked Ricky. R.S: Lucy asked Ricky to promise her that until their child was at least 19 or 20 he would not talk to it.
9."What's the matter with the way I talk?" Ricky asked. R.S: Ricky asked what the matter was with the way he talked.
10. "Well, I haven't told you this before," Lucy said, "but you speak with the slight accent." R.S: Lucy said that she hadn't told him that before but he spoke with the slight accent.
1.Lucy answered, "The language that I want our child to learn, Good English." R.S; Lucy answered that good English that she wanted their child to learn.
2."That's English?" Ricky asked Lucy, and she answered, "Yes." R.S; Ricky asked Lucy if that was English. She answered yes.
3.Ricly said, "Now Lucy, you are not gonna teach our child that way, are you?" R.S; Ricky asked if you were not gonna teach our child that way.
4.Lucy said, "Ricky, promise me something." "What?" Ricky answered. R.S; Lucy asked Ricky to promise her something. Ricky answered what you wanted me to promise.
5."You can understand me, can't you?" Ricky asked. R.S; Ricky asked Lucy if you could understand me.
6.Lucy answered, "Well now yes, I learned to listen with the accent." R.S; Lucy answered that she had learned to listen with the accent, so she could understand now.
7."Would you remember when you proposed?" Lucy asked. Ricky said, "Yes..." R.S; Lucy asked Ricky if you remembered when you proposed. Ricky answered yes.
8.Lucy said, "When I said Yes, I wasn't sure that you asked me to get married or go to the movie." R.S; Lucy told that she hadn't been sure that he asked her to get married or go to the movie, when she said yes.
9.Ricky said, "Oh That's it. I had enough." R.S; Ricky said that was it, I had had enough.
10.Ricky said, "We're gonna teach our child to speak Spanish." Lucy asked, "Spanish?" R.S; Ricky told Lucy that they were gonna teach their child to speak Spanish. Lucy asked what he said.
1._"The language I want our child to learn, good English," Lucy replied. 1.RS: Lucy replied the language she wanted her child to learn was good English.
2._"That's English?!" Ricky exclaimed. 2.RS: Ricky exclaimed if that was English.
3._Ricky said "You are not goind to teach our child to talk that way, are you?" 3,RS: Ricky asked Lucy if she was going to teach their child to talk that way.
4._Lucy told Ricky:"Promise me, that until our child is at last 9 or 20 years old you won't talk to him" 4.RS: : Lucy told Ricky to promise her that until the kid was 19 or 20 years old he wouldn’t talk to him.
5._Ricky asked: "What's the matter with the way I talk?" 5.RS: Ricky asked what was the matter with the way he talked.
6._Lucy responded, "Well I haven'y told you this before dear, but you speak with a slight accent". 6.RS: Lucy responded that he hadn’t told him before but he spoke with a slight accent.
7._"Well now yeah, I learned to listen with an accent," Lucy said. 7.RS: Lucy said well then yes, she had learned to listen with an accent.
8._Lucy told Ricky "That shows how little you know about the English language". 8.RS: Lucy told Ricky that showed how little he knew about the English language.
9._Ricky said: "I know it can't be COW" 9.RS: Ricky said he knew it couldn’t be pronounce “cow”
10._Ricky told Lucy "We are gonna teach our child to speak Spanish". 10.RS: Ricky told Lucy they were going to teach their child to speak Spanish.
2. asked, not exclaimed. 5. what the matter was with the way he talked 6. ...with a slight accent." 8. ...English language." 9. periods at the end 10. Ricky told Lucy, "We...Spanish."
The punctuation mark goes INSIDE the quotation mark at the end of the sentence.
1."The language that I want our child to learn," Lucy answered, "good English".
ReplyDeleteR.S: Lucy answered that was good English, the language that she wanted their child to learn.
2. "That's English?" Ricky asked.
R.S: Ricky asked if that was English.
3. "It's funny thing," Lucy said, "when it's spoken correctly, you don't even recognize it, do you?"
R.S: Lucy said, it was funny that Ricky didn't even recognize English when it was spoken correctly.
4. "You know, I had no idea how sloppy my speech was till I started reading this book." Lucy said to Ricky.
R.S: Lucy told Ricky that she had had no idea how sloppy her speech had been till she had started reading that book.
5. "No really," Lucy said, "it's truth, but they have wonderful exercise to correct it."
R.S: Lucy said that was truth, but they had wonderful exercise to correct it.
6. "What did you say?" Lucy asked.
R.S: Lucy asked, what he had said.
7. "You heard what I said." Ricky answered.
R.S: Ricky told her that she had heard what he had said.
8. "Promise me that until our child is at least 19 or 20 years old you won't talk to it." Lucy asked Ricky.
R.S: Lucy asked Ricky to promise her that until their child was at least 19 or 20 he would not talk to it.
9."What's the matter with the way I talk?" Ricky asked.
R.S: Ricky asked what the matter was with the way he talked.
10. "Well, I haven't told you this before," Lucy said, "but you speak with the slight accent."
R.S: Lucy said that she hadn't told him that before but he spoke with the slight accent.
1. ... "good English."
DeleteLucy answered that good English was the language she wanted their child to learn.
4... book," Lucy said to Ricky.
6. Lucy asked what he had said. (No comma)
7. ...said," Ricky answered.
8. ...talk to it," Lucy asked Ricky.
Good work, Paulina.
1.Lucy answered, "The language that I want our child to learn, Good English."
ReplyDeleteR.S; Lucy answered that good English that she wanted their child to learn.
2."That's English?" Ricky asked Lucy, and she answered, "Yes."
R.S; Ricky asked Lucy if that was English. She answered yes.
3.Ricly said, "Now Lucy, you are not gonna teach our child that way, are you?"
R.S; Ricky asked if you were not gonna teach our child that way.
4.Lucy said, "Ricky, promise me something." "What?" Ricky answered.
R.S; Lucy asked Ricky to promise her something. Ricky answered what you wanted me to promise.
5."You can understand me, can't you?" Ricky asked.
R.S; Ricky asked Lucy if you could understand me.
6.Lucy answered, "Well now yes, I learned to listen with the accent."
R.S; Lucy answered that she had learned to listen with the accent, so she could understand now.
7."Would you remember when you proposed?" Lucy asked. Ricky said, "Yes..."
R.S; Lucy asked Ricky if you remembered when you proposed. Ricky answered yes.
8.Lucy said, "When I said Yes, I wasn't sure that you asked me to get married or go to the movie."
R.S; Lucy told that she hadn't been sure that he asked her to get married or go to the movie, when she said yes.
9.Ricky said, "Oh That's it. I had enough."
R.S; Ricky said that was it, I had had enough.
10.Ricky said, "We're gonna teach our child to speak Spanish." Lucy asked, "Spanish?"
R.S; Ricky told Lucy that they were gonna teach their child to speak Spanish. Lucy asked what he said.
1. Lucy answered that it was good English that she wanted him to learn.
Delete3. Ricky asked her if she was...
4. Ricky asked Lucy what she wanted him to promise.
5. Ricky asked Lucy if she could understand him.
6. R.S. PRONOUNS!
9. R.S. PRONOUNS!
Mostly correct. Nice work, Natsume.
1. Ricky said,"It's a very nice thought, but as usual you will have no logical explanation for doing it the way you're doing it."
ReplyDelete- Ricky said that was a very nice thought, but as usual you would have no logical explanation for doing it the way you was doing it.
2. "What did you say?" Lucy asked.
-Lucy asked what he had said.
3."You heard what i said." Ricky answered.
-Ricky told Lucy that she had heard what he had said.
4.Ricky asked,"What's the matter with the way I talk?"
- Ricky asked what the matter with the way he talked was.
5. "I had enough." Ricky said.
- Ricky said that he had had enough.
6. Ricky asked,"Should i say ENO?"
-Ricky asked if he should said ENO.
7. Lucy said,"That shows how little you know about the English language."
-Lucy said that his reading showed how little he knew about the English language.
8."We're gonna teach our child to speak Spanish." Ricky said.
-Ricky said that they was going to teach their child to speak Spanish.
9."And don't want you to talk to the kid until he's 21 years old." Ricky said.
-Ricky said that he didn't want Lucy to talk to the kid until he's 21.
10. Lucy said,"Our child is going to learn English,but first we have to learn."
- Lucy said that their child was going to learn English, but first they had to learn.
1. Pronoun change
Delete8. ...to speak Spanish," Ricky said.
...they were going to...
Excellent work, Abdulaziz.
1._"The language I want our child to learn, good English," Lucy replied.
ReplyDelete1.RS: Lucy replied the language she wanted her child to learn was good English.
2._"That's English?!" Ricky exclaimed.
2.RS: Ricky exclaimed if that was English.
3._Ricky said "You are not goind to teach our child to talk that way, are you?"
3,RS: Ricky asked Lucy if she was going to teach their child to talk that way.
4._Lucy told Ricky:"Promise me, that until our child is at last 9 or 20 years old you won't talk to him"
4.RS: : Lucy told Ricky to promise her that until the kid was 19 or 20 years old he wouldn’t talk to him.
5._Ricky asked: "What's the matter with the way I talk?"
5.RS: Ricky asked what was the matter with the way he talked.
6._Lucy responded, "Well I haven'y told you this before dear, but you speak with a slight accent".
6.RS: Lucy responded that he hadn’t told him before but he spoke with a slight accent.
7._"Well now yeah, I learned to listen with an accent," Lucy said.
7.RS: Lucy said well then yes, she had learned to listen with an accent.
8._Lucy told Ricky "That shows how little you know about the English language".
8.RS: Lucy told Ricky that showed how little he knew about the English language.
9._Ricky said: "I know it can't be COW"
9.RS: Ricky said he knew it couldn’t be pronounce “cow”
10._Ricky told Lucy "We are gonna teach our child to speak Spanish".
10.RS: Ricky told Lucy they were going to teach their child to speak Spanish.
2. asked, not exclaimed.
Delete5. what the matter was with the way he talked
6. ...with a slight accent."
8. ...English language."
9. periods at the end
10. Ricky told Lucy, "We...Spanish."
The punctuation mark goes INSIDE the quotation mark at the end of the sentence.
Good work, Mariana.